A story
2
By Battleforce6
That’s all, just a story. Left me with no appreciation for the story. Did not raise any feels. Did,
Incomplete ?
3
By Beckster61
This seems to be an idea of an interesting novel that was never written and a quick ending was thrown just for fun. I like novels as and I like DBs novels but this was a waste of time to read.
Review
5
By The Phantom Reader
This book is amazing for the price!
Huh
1
By BuddB1
Not even a short story with an ending
No Time Left
1
By Disappointed Balducci Fan
I also thought I had failed to download the whole book; realized it was a short story but 36 pages??? I was really enjoying the story, but really misleading and disappointing.
Maybe he'll finish it now that he has disappointed so many fans.
Too Short
4
By PMReilly
This has all the plot development for a novel, yet it ends way too soon. Wish there had been more.
No time left
1
By Ljkquilter
I buy books to read. Would never have bought it for 40 pages.
Only 40 pages long, but intriguing.
3
By Camcl
Too bad he didn't think about making the story line a full length novel
Strange
3
By STT Girl
Interesting but unfullfilling.
No time left
4
By 19368
It was a good book it left me hanging at the end though with no real ending. I was expecting it to be a bit longer but it was a very nice short and sweet book. I recommend it.